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Music as a peace messenger

It is time to realise that the rat race destroys the best in us, namely love and freedom. Refusing the consumer society can safeguard us against the pitfalls of life.

Mankind is a whole, thus we are all involved whether we deal with war or natural resources depletion. We should be aware of our accountability to the Earth and future generations and learn to look not only after ourselves but also after others. Our salvation lies in substituting self-centredness and xenophobia for boundless generosity.

Music constitutes the best means of reuniting men, for it is a formidable social force teaching listening to others and consequently tolerance, creativity and self-fulfilment. Utopian though it may sound, Mankind needs such idealism to progress. (125 words)

 

Music as a messenger for peace.

Careerism, the rat race, commercial values are lethal for they lead us to ignore the essential: liberty, like the liberty to play the piano or the violin.

We are all part of humanity and collectively responsible for the planet. Are we really aware of it?

We are responsible for ourselves and for others. Consequently, we should share everything we have as it is a guarantee of peace. The arts and music in particular are fundamental. Playing an instrument involves listening as well, thus making us more tolerant. The artist’s role is to open minds and liberate talents. We dream of a better world. It may be utopian but it is an ideal necessary for the progress of humanity. (124 words)

 

 

Materialism kills what is the best in us: love and freedom. But we can choose another way of life punctuated by music, and better for us.

Humanity is indivisible, that’s why we have responsibilities towards each other and the whole humanity should worry about the dangers threatening the world.

Artists should assume the responsibility of their faults instead of blaming others. Furthermore we should be far more generous and defend out enenmies as well as ourselves.

Indeed sharing and listening to others remain the best way to preserve peace. So musicians having these two qualities tend to set and maintain harmony between people.

Dreaming of a utopian world with eternal peace is not vain, it helps Mankind to progress.

 

Money  and the rat race kills love and liberty. We must learn once again what is essential in life and forget what is polluting our minds, such as the consumer society.

We all belong to the same entity, that is why we all feel the world’s wide pain. But it also implies that we must be involved in this pain to solve it.

From our childhood we should be responsible for the people too and care about them instead of protecting ourselves against foreigners.

Sharing is still the best guarantor of peace. Music is a good example, because you don’t only play you also listen, you do not give, you also receive.

Indeed, we may be utopians, but without utopia there is no progress for Mankind.